Quote Originally Posted by grignr View Post
The small, solitary voice saying "I never said I was frightened of dying" gets me every time. I would have a single, small light pulse to those words while the rest of the display is dark.
When I get the final draft of that side done, I'll share it here, because it's a key moment for me, too. I currently have the words appear dimly in my windows (gray on black), fading out slowly behind her. As the words are being spoken, most of the lights are dimming off, so the focus at that moment zeroes right into those words. Your idea of the Jimney Cricket/Tinker Bell/Conscience light pulse is really good. Sort of like a tiny pinhole from whence the words emanate.

I actually tear up a little when she speaks.